Feedback

After hearing the feedback Mr. Tangen gave my paper I thought different things. First, i wasn't really amused when he said my essay had some typos and that it was all over the place. I struggled at first finding a topic to talk about and changed my initial topic to the one I used. Even though it was a topic I knew I could spend a long time talking about, it was a very broad topic and didn't exactly know how to lead the idea of my paper. I did struggle with the organization and topics I was going to talk about in it so his feedback regarding this didn't surprise me very much. I realized too that I made a lot of general statements, and i'm glad he made me notice that so I can further improve my writing skills.